Friday, November 29, 2013

the world around me

The world around me is beautiful
The world around me is wonderful
But Why is it sad? 
But why is it sad?
Did you make it mad?
Did you make it mad?
Its bad!
Its bad!
We can make it green
We can make it green
By planting more trees

by Inaya Saad

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14 comments:

  1. saadNovember 30, 2013 at 5:49 AM

    very good my little daughter..keep it up

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  2. mamaNovember 30, 2013 at 5:54 AM

    Proud of you inaya! keep writing!

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  3. inayaNovember 30, 2013 at 6:00 AM

    oh mama thankkyou for your comment

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  4. Sabeen khalaNovember 30, 2013 at 7:57 AM

    Dear Inaya ,beautiful poem.I love it.Hope to see more soon.

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    1. inayaDecember 1, 2013 at 2:42 AM

      oo thankyou sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mush every one

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  5. Facebook commentsDecember 1, 2013 at 2:45 AM

    Kishwar Enam Lovely work Inaya!.

    Syed Perwez Zahoor · 9 mutual friends
    Lovely said!

    Asif Alam Like mother like daughter!! amazing!!

    Nausheen Shoaib clever girl!

    Saba Umer · Friends with Sabeen Jamal and 3 others
    So cute, MA!
    Saima Sardar Like mother like daughter,,, very well written inaya ,,i cldnt comment there
    Mahjabeen Irshad good
    Kiran Shah · Friends with Shua Murtaza and 4 others
    following in ur footsteps:) all the best to her..
    Ashher Alam cute......
    Najm Us Sahar Imtiaz good....
    Aisha Naseem MashaAllah v nice

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  6. UnknownDecember 1, 2013 at 10:37 AM

    cute!!!

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  7. fara khalaDecember 1, 2013 at 12:19 PM

    i love it inaya!! waiting for more. lots of love

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  8. Anjum IqbalDecember 1, 2013 at 7:48 PM

    "Good Inaya! Walking in your mom's footsteps?"

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  9. inayaDecember 3, 2013 at 1:49 AM

    today i din"t go to school

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  10. MufafaDecember 19, 2013 at 6:24 AM

    It's sooo good, Inaya!!

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  11. Iqbal AhmedJuly 12, 2014 at 10:18 AM

    Good Inaya keep it up

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  12. DadiJuly 12, 2014 at 10:23 AM

    Keep it up

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